Mag and Pat's On-line Show

Brother in Law · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:26 pm Post subject: So fair...

So fair is she
So fair her face
So fair her pulsing figure

Not so fair
The manical stare
Of her husbnad whose much bigger

(poem by Spike Milligan)
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Pam · Extremist Joined: 21 Jun 2007 Posts: 1020 Location: Sibu

Do you write haikus Marty? u did the odes to mag and pat.
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Brother in Law · Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:04 pm Post subject:

..don't undertsnad HAIKUS Question

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Pam · Extremist Joined: 21 Jun 2007 Posts: 1020 Location: Sibu

A haiku is a 3-liner poem just like the one u posted above. Smile

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Brother in Law · Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:14 pm Post subject:

.. mainly limericks.. but I have written all sorts of stuff.. but it is as the mood takes you.. not something I do often... Laughing

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zulPutrajaya · Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 9:58 pm Post subject:

me so confuse,
daze and clueless,
I feel dumb..

is that haiku pam?
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Brother in Law · Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:03 am Post subject:

It's not fair
There's still no show
It's been off the air
How long I don't know

No Mag and Pat
With friendly verver
Just me and the cat
Still without a server

Don't bother telling me... I can't hear you... What? What?
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Martin
Pat's brother-in-law

Pam · Extremist Joined: 21 Jun 2007 Posts: 1020 Location: Sibu

Try to make the ending syllables rhyme, zul just like martin's. his rhyme scheme is abab, cdcd. get the idea? try a haiku that ends with aaa.
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zulPutrajaya · Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 10:48 pm Post subject:

i know a fella
so nice he is kinda
tall he is sorta...

hehehe hows that!
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Pam · Extremist Joined: 21 Jun 2007 Posts: 1020 Location: Sibu

That's a modern kinda haiku zul.. but u did fine. Give u a C+ lah. Wink

But for the message behind, i'l upgrade it to a B+. Wink

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zulPutrajaya · Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 10:50 pm Post subject:

B eh....good enough laaaaa... usually i get F only
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