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Telenovela....Created by zul
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:02 am    Post subject: Telenovela....Created by zul Reply with quote

Love... In the afternoon

(ala spanish telenovela created by zul..starring the afternoon family)

Characters:

Patrizio (The patriach of the family... A very rich man) : Pat

Magdelene (The Matriach of the family... Patrizio Mother in Law) : Mag

Arturo (Magdelene dejected lover) : Arthur

Marvin (The hunky gardener) : Martin

Pamela (The maid) : Pamela

Crash (Patrizio Bodyguard) : Cash

Zeeta (The supermodel) : Zee

Juan Jerry (what else...the janitor) : Jerry

Jose Zul (Patrizio Step Son) : Zul

other character will be introduce soon
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

episode 1

One sunday afternoon....

Magdelene stares angrily at Patrizio "You marry my daughter for her money Patrizio... You never love her... You GOLD DIGGER!".

"Enough mother!... I love my wife dearly... even though Jose Zul hates me... I still consider him my son!" Patrizio said strongly.

"Don't call me mother Patrizio... I never consider you my son! and don't try to take away my dear Zul....All my wealth will go to him" and she left the room...leaving Patrizio... quiet but in his mind...a revenge is scheming. While from outside Arturo is smiling.. He had heard everything... and yes.. he is also plotting something... now he can have Madelene's love forever...

to be continue..
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 8:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eeee...don't want! Don't want! Who wants the old matriach??? I want the maid!!! U'll have to rewrite...!!!! Ha ha ha ha ha!!!
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

.. sometimes you have to go with the flow Arthur Laughing
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

FYI arthur...magdelene is former Miss Universe from Venezuela... Married to President of Venezuela before he is murdered (probably by Arturo) so Magdelene inherited his late husband billions...

Magdelene daughter, Beatricia marry General Santos Dama (new characters.. They where so in love when suddenly Gen Santos Dama was found dead in a ditch conveniently dug by Marvin, leaving Beatricia his only son Jose Zul.

Beatricia then marries Patrizio .. without the blessing of magdelene... and lo and behold Beatricia was also found dead in the toilet conveniently recently polised by Jerry...PHEWW
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Omigawd! People my age would prefer a simpler storyline! Now I'm all confused...and we've barely started!!! LOL!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

let just say...everyone in this story is trying to kill someone LOL
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:41 am    Post subject: episode 2 Reply with quote

somewhere in the barnyard...

Marvin sweat glisten on his chest.. he has been working on the barnyard since morning.. Magdelene is watching marvin from afar.. her old heart pounding hard.. Her breathing deep and long.. Marvin young(er) body is making magdelene hot.. and she is loving it.. Then suddenly Magdelene heart skip a beat.. She can't breathe... She is having a heart attack!.. She grasp for air... with her last stregth she muster her last call.. ZUULLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!

to be continued
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 12:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Somehow I can't help but feel that Zul is personifying himself in that Magdalen character!!! Ha ha ha ha ha!!!!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

..if this carries on I will have to apply ban control to Zul so he can't access the forum for a while... Evil or Very Mad Shocked Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 7:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wait a minute.. is everyone here over 18? The story must be screened through first before allowed on the www. Laughing
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

a ban???? on me??? whats this?? no freedom of speech?? is this net censorship??? darnnnn

btw..arthur... well let just say i was carried away by that magdelene character...
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WARNING THIS STRORY ARE RATEd 25 PG so if you are under 25...go to www.disney.com... thank you
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 8:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great! My old avatar is back!!! And poor Zul...still a tortoise (turtles have flippers lah!), and an old ugly one at that! Not so cute anymore, Zul? Looking at that face, u certainly look more than 25....at least 52, I think!!! LOL!
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 9:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

at least i have a fabulous eyelashes hehehe ...btw i think my avatar is signifying my age....huhuhuhu i am getting olllddd uwaaaaa
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 6:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zul, wat happened? U look so wrinkled and haggard. By the way, how come i'm not given a glamorous name in ur novel Question
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

gosh i didt age gracefully LOL

btw Pam....Pamela not glamorous??? tell that to Pamela Anderson... but who knows Pam your character might change her name in the future
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Episode 3

In San Traxxio General Hospital...

"Oh Granma Magdelene...wake up..." pleas Zul... "You havent finish your will yet!"....

while somewhere in the Casa Rosa Thalia Maria (Or Casa RTM for short)..

the ever glamorous super model Zeeta storms thru the great room and screams "Arturo!!! Arturo!!! you @^#@!^(!@(!@^(@!^#... ...look what you have done!!... IM HAVING YOUR CHILD...!!" jeng jeng jennnggg
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

... hey Zul... even I can't stretch my imagaination this far.. Rolling Eyes Shocked Wink Laughing
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well...when you are 28 and still alone...my imagination can scratch quite far hehehehehe
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